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The end is near

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Chapter 2       The end is near

   Every time a thought would come to mind, it would stay put. I wouldn't taste it in my mouth; the sour or sweetness of it drove me mad. There, the thought lay in a dark and crowded place, never to be heard of again.

   I was no better than a plant, something either to admire or to eventually let die away. It did not matter, I was weak. And though I let it all get to me, I regretted it.

   The man from my mother's life will be the death of my humanity. I still have the feeling of her regret grinding at my teeth; it stinks up my nose.

  They were gone; all her smiles were wiped away from my memory. A foreign texture had touched her lips and left me her bitter words. No longer being myself, I was to have a mute feeling that kept at my consciousness; all those screams of anger burn my ears, forcing the numbness to envelope me.
This is chapter 2 of a novel I hope I can finish soon to feature on DA. I am just giving you a glimpse of the style of writing that I like. The novel wont feature just this sort of style because I plan on adding a lot of plot in it. Um.. Duh!
But because this is one of my best pieces of literature, I thought I might what to showcase how skilled of a writer I am compared to the discontinued '6 Aces' series that I wrote a few years ago.
Hope you all enjoy, and have your fingers crossed that I finish this novel soon! Bye!
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